21/4/2006
"ljubavna"

jučer smo se voljeli opet

nakon dugo vremena

žestoko

(ovu mi je riječ u amanet

ostavio rat - njome su opisivali

i djela i nedjela, svi u nj' umiješani

nama zbunjenima)

ali ovo je ljubavna pjesma

dramatska stanka

uzrokovana odbjeglom misli

često mi se dogodi

 

kao i u pravoj ljubavi

kako to nazivam kad ne želim

biti prosta

 

       Elfrida Matuč-Mahulja/Krk

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) kako dobro pises! ova mi se mnogo dopada
Poslao sweetness u 03:25, 22/4/2006 | Link | |
Žestoko napisano.
Poslao Lady u 07:48, 22/4/2006 | Link | |
meni je draga ta riječ "žestoko".... mnogo toga sadrži...
Poslao purplemoon u 09:46, 22/4/2006 | Link | |
... neka bude ljubavna
Poslao zaratustra u 13:55, 22/4/2006 | Link | |
Čemu prijava na nalog?Zar je to neki specijalan blog?Ovako imam samo kao anoniman mogućnost da te čitam i komentiram,a to neću.DIDA!
Poslao Anoniman u 16:59, 22/4/2006 | Link | |
Pusa i tebi!
Poslao DIDA u 18:38, 22/4/2006 | Link | |
...aha lijepa verzija zestokog... p.
Poslao Mr. Dax u 09:40, 23/4/2006 | Link | |
©
pis sister
žestoki pis
♪♪♪♪♪♪


Izmenjeno od III dana 7/6/2006 u 09:08
Poslao III u 09:08, 7/6/2006 | Link | |
...juče ste se voljeli, blago vama...
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