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WHA HAIGA CONTEST

World Haiku Association, 62nd Haiga Contest
Boriboj Bukva (Croatia)
2.35 out of 3.00 points

Vrganji i
kravlja balega na
sumskom putu.



Mushrooms and
cow's dung on
a forest path

translation: Slobodan Milosevic


Judge's comment: A nice drawing. Haiku, however, seems to lack the first line. The verse is in three lines, but needs another line for cutting. Without a proper cutting, the verse is just a short sentence and not haiku.



WHA - 62nd HAIGA CONTEST

Vrganji i
kravlja balega na
sumskom putu.



Mushrooms and
cow's dung on
a forest path


translation: Slobodan Milosevic


http://www.worldhaiku.net/
haiga_contest/62nd/borivoj_bukva.html


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U Rijeci, 30.12.2008. godine              
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