World Haiku Association, 60th Haiga Contest «

30/10/2008 «
WHA haiga contest
 
 
Boriboj Bukva (Croatia)
2.40 out of 3.00 points
Poranila jesen.
U hladnoj noi -
pomor lastavica.

Early Autumn.
In a cold night -
swallows die.

Translation: Slobodan Milosevic
Judge's comment: Nice color drawing. However, what it shows and the content of the haiku do not correspond well. The drawing looks so alive and the verse talks about death.
 
 
 
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U Rijeci, 29.09.2008. godine                             Borivoj Bukva

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